Why did this end
Like a separation of land
With something lost
It will no longer last
It finished this way
with a huge fray
And now you are gone
And I am alone
My thoughts are gone with the wind
Nothing else to find
I feel as though as I am blind
I'm in the wrong state of mind
I am glad of this end
Nothing else left to bend
Don't depend or defend, just descend
You're no longer a friend.
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This poem is a narrative poem about a person losing his/her friend.
The first stanza is about he/her reflecting on why did it end, and that it will never come back. The second stanza is how the person left after a fight. The third stanza is how the narrator is shocked of the person leaving and their feelings coping with their loss. Finally the fourth stanza is the narrator accepting the fact that they might be happier with the person out of their life.
I wrote this poem based on a personal experience that I've had with a certain person.
The figurative elements in this poem are - Similie (Line 2) Personification (Line 9), Alliteration (Line 11)
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